In my opinion the only thing that is really somewhat successful is the placement and alignment of "downtown" with the "n" aligned with the side of the building. It is still a little close to the edge of the composition though.
Friday, December 10, 2010
In this poster iteration, I clearly need to take a step back and think about what I was doing. It was at the end of the project and I was feeling pressed for time and I let that dictate some of my design decisions where it shouldn't have. While I think this iteration has some potential it really had no place in this project. Where I should have been choosing a line study that is cohesive with the lines and angles of the building. Instead I decided it was a good idea to take the least noticeable lines to work off of. The two really just don't go together enough outside of that one instance, and while the perspective is a nice idea, it only succeeds in making a clutter and doesn't tie in the rest of the image appropriately.