The metaphorical representation of her warm sultry sound feels dated and is not as original as my antithetical representation.
This last one will be the one I pursue further.
Folly Crit Checklist
Have you connected with the audience?
Yes, but it connects to two different audiences. (young adults/adults)
Is the message clear?
There are moments where the stylistic choices get in the way of clarity. (smooth flowing graphics are better)
There are moments where the stylistic choices get in the way of clarity. (smooth flowing graphics are better)
Is it visible from a distance?
The darker compositions have more clarity from a distance, while the snowy compositions are muddy.
What is the visual entry point?
The grass is the entry point in the snow compositions. The red sax and the body form are the entry points of the two smokey compositions.
What is the second element you want to see?
Sax in the snow and in the darker compositions.
Do the visual codes connect to and represent the subject?
Conceptually they do. Still working on the formal side of it.
Are there any emotional cues?
The warming in the cold environment gives a warm feeling.
The warming in the cold environment gives a warm feeling.
What makes it memorable?
The contrast in color. Original concept.
The contrast in color. Original concept.
Are there any distractions?
The banner could be distracting.
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